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Ok, so I am from Arizona, and I have been working on a British accent for a few years now. I think that the accent I do would be from, well, I am not sure! I want you to please listen to this recording I made, and tell me how bad or good my accent is, where it sounds like it's from, and tips on how to improve on it. I really love Brits, as I have family members directly from the UK, and I have been working on an accent for a while. Now I need to know what you think of it………
http://s259.photobucket.com/albums/hh314…

PS, this was recorded in the dark, and I was holding a flashlight and trying to keep it covered but….

Please just tell me what you think! CHEERS to you all!
sorry if the link isn't workin' mate! I can't really fix that, it is probably your computer! Thanks for tryin'!

Ey mate, the link doesn't work.